I AM A FREE BIRD, BUT I LOVE RAIN
No wonder I can touch the sky,
If anybody watches me, I won’t shy,
If anybody touches me, I would fly,
I am a free bird, but I love rain
Yes I love the rain,
I feel the wet warmth in it, when the drops rolls through my feathers,
I can feel the love when it touches me so hard at times so mild,
I can see the happiness all around,
Although I can’t fly when it rains,
I am a free bird, but I love rain.
Everyone cherish as it comes and leave a natural scent all over
I feel so proud to be a lover of such a beautiful nature’s gift ever,
It leaves a smile on everyone’s face,
Whether it’s a child or an old stage,
Every of my friend waits for it so hard,
So that every of them can get a refreshing lard,
I am a free bird, but I love rain.
As always one day I was flying so high,
I was happy that it could rain at any time,
As I can feel the lovely warmth,
As I knew my love would arise,
Suddenly I heard something muttering,I wondered what it would be,
I can’t see anything because it was wide,
After few minutes I recognised,
It’s the cloud, who thundered so loud,
I recognised when I found myself lying on grounds,
Suddenly I saw my feathers are not around,
Then I got that thunder shrewd them away,
And it rained all over again,
And now I can’t say I can still fly,
I can now feel a lover’s pain,
I not a free bird anymore, but I still love rain.
U Der?
ReplyDeleteOrkut pey scrap ni kar sakta u ko :(
nicee haaa
ReplyDelete@atul thnx dear
ReplyDeleteWas very admirable. Keep it up the rain !!
ReplyDeleteTue ato bhalo likhish ami-e jantam na.I love u my mini.Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteSorry for arriving so late.
ReplyDeleteYes a wonderful writing this is. I would rate this as your best so far... Content, way of expressing, the weaving of ideas all are just perfect !!! The way you have allowed the writing to flow touches strings of feelings deep down...
Keep writing more...
tu kabse kavitri ban gai..anywayz wonderful job..very nicely written..i never knew u think so deep as well..Carry on with this amazing work..looking fwd to see some more nice stuff from your end
ReplyDeletehey i think i can cover this song on guitar..that will make a gud music and lyrics ;)
ReplyDelete@John : Hey thnx, wish i can hear my words in a way of song.
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